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Five rhymes for the times
Seven vodkas, ice and limes
Five crimes for five dimes  

Thanks to conect for the inspiration
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Average: 5 (4 votes)
Submitted by weirdelf on 10 June 2007 - 11:53pm.
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I lied.

There are only 4 rhymes. Will try to do better next time

Submitted by conect11 on 11 June 2007 - 3:11pm.

LIAR!

you’re lucky Australia is already a penal colony! lol I also believe I commented on this elsewhere… it’s still good, though.

Submitted by weirdelf on 25 July 2007 - 4:56am.
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that's it! Eureka!

the 5th rhyme,
five crimes for five dimes
thanks mark
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by barbsdad2003 on 24 July 2007 - 9:39am.
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Short and Sweet!

And I like rhymes and times and limes and dimes.
Although by last count I just don’t accumulate
enough of the dimes for these costly times.

Thanx,
Chuckles

Submitted by IKnowNoBox on 9 November 2007 - 9:49pm.
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Brother could ypou spare time ...

for a rhyme about a dime for a change.