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Submitted by HDGoodman on 8 August 2007 - 3:31am.
Style / Type:
freeform
I’m softcore,
I sing in the shower with the waterdrops
Hitting the floor.
I’m softcore,
I only drink booze under 20%
Nothing more!
I’m softcore
I don’t follow religion,
But vegetarianism my law.
I’m softcore,
I won’t watch films with
Blood guts or gore.
I’m softcore,
I read alot
But try not to be a bore.
I’m softcore,
I write sensitive poetry
behind my closed door.
I’m softcore,
I play acoustic guitar
because distortion makes my brain sore.
i let my brother M. Shun Lee post a poem under my name. its a gift from him to me and you.
(2 votes)
Softcore
hahahah, excellent. Love it, thank you!
Love the comedy, wordplay and surprises. You take risks and don’t seem afraid of not being able to follow whatever comes along…I really like this piece.
cool family, cool poetry
cheers,
Jess
ssg
sweet sentiment man
dig the irony
sweet in its softcore glory
Excellent flow and Imagery
I love this - it flows like a song and reads like a dream. Made me chuckle….lol and I totally relate to it! Brilliant language use - excellent gift! Kaz x