Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
MASK
MASK
Where are the movers and shakers
the promises of better things
Where are the friends
where did the family ties go
who are these faces new
these bullies and these takers
who are these cannibals
feasting on my soul.
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
Comments
Geremia
Sun, 2013-05-05 09:18
:)
:)
Rula
Sun, 2013-05-05 14:44
joe
So many questions but unfortunatelly no answes. A good capture of this unmarciful life.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
Please follow me on Instagram https://instagram.com/poetry.jo?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=
Geremia
Sun, 2013-05-05 15:07
Yes :)
Yes :)
Nordic cloud
Mon, 2013-05-06 10:43
a very well worded poem
Apart from what this is saying,
well not entirely,
it is a very well worded poem in my opinion;
as I see it was for Rula too.
Good show Joe, love Anni
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Geremia
Mon, 2013-05-06 11:57
Takk, min Anni
Takk, min Anni