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To loneliness
The loneliness inside me,
that reigns as a tomb
and the moon burning on my tongue,
ignorant and all-knowing he laughs
the years passed, the gate-keeper
of my night, what happened
with your countenance?
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
washing tears
Wed, 2011-07-20 01:28
Nevel,
i feel as if we should all write to our loneliness, thank you for sharing this with us, its a haunting read that made me re read it a few times.
-with what love could be...
Washing Tears