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After Nighttime Snowfall
Black morning stillness
icy calm speaks dark reproach
shadows this landscape
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Meh
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Thu, 2023-02-09 23:49
Haiku
Makes me think of dark, early mornings following a winter storm. There is an icy calm that follows. Well done.
~RoseBlack~
Seren
Fri, 2023-02-10 08:54
Dear Tim
You're a master at pulling at the senses, this is a brilliant Haiku dark and foreboding,
This is brilliantly executed.
I wish I could convey how much this has affected me tonight, I've had a day.
Kind regards Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Lightning Dust
Sat, 2023-02-11 00:12
Hi Rosewood Apothecary
Masterfully written. I freaking love this!
LD
Candlewitch
Sat, 2023-02-11 05:48
dear Tim,
beautifully dark grey...you have made every word count! almost ethereal! I love it!
* hugs, Cat
*
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Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2023-02-11 06:59
I am a little shocked at the response
I had a tough time with this one. I’ve revised it like 6 times. I am really glad you all liked it. I felt it was mediocre but usually if I post something that needs work you guys tell me so. Ha, well I guess it’s acceptable. It’s definitely coherent.
Thanks for reading,
Tim
lovedly
Sat, 2023-02-11 07:18
By structured Eastern
Did you mean a HAIKU ?
Tim
let me know
I'm DIM
Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2023-02-11 13:20
Yes
Yup
lovedly
Mon, 2023-02-13 03:27
Then it's
lovely 5 7 5