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If these were my last words
If these were my last words I would say.
It’s going to be okay. Before you go to bed make sure you pray.
Don’t make it harder on yourself. Theirs nothing wrong and don’t be afraid to ask God for help. He’s always there when you feel like their is no one else.
If these were my last words I would say.
You could do whatever you want, anything. As long as you have faith, their will be nothing stopping your way.
Walk with the Lord every step that you take. Don’t be ashamed! Walking with him you will see yourself change and now your feeling bad if you don’t behave.
If these were my last words I would say.
Present yourself professional not ghetto.
God is the only one that doesn’t judge everybody else does. While they do you just continue.
What you want to do to make your dreams come true.
Delilah
Comments
Lavender
Tue, 2022-11-29 22:12
If These Were My Last Words
Greetings, Delilah,
Welcome to Neopoet! These are inspiring, encouraging words, well said. You may want to choose a different poetry form. Some of the lines are pretty lengthy and may discourage the reader from understanding the entire poem and its meaning. I like your title very much - intriguing! I look forward to reading more!
Thank you,
Lavender