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Graceful mornings
Too early in the morning
going about to the forest
to enjoy greenery
the breeze
the fragrance
the chirping of birds
the small meows of cats
and
barks of dogs
the cocka -doodle-do
of cocks and hens
view the distant wild animal's
yawns
do come along with me
rejoice natures gift
as well as the sweetness
of my voice
yours will fall
alas on deaf ears
sad for you
but
SMILE
lovedly
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
lovedly
Fri, 2017-05-19 21:10
small edits
Too early in the morning
going about to the forest
to enjoy greenery
the flowers born anew
the breeze
the fragrance
the chirping of birds
the soft meows of cats
and
loud barks of dogs
the cocka -doodle-do
of cocks and hens
view in the distant
wild animals
yawns....
Do come along with me
rejoice nature’s gift
as well as the sweetness
of my voice
yours will fall
alas on deaf ears
sad for you
but
smile
Lovedly
lovedly
Sat, 2017-05-20 07:00
Just to draw your attention.. Audrie
to come and read me
greedy no!
I am not totattly deaf one ear is okay
but use time machne
take snaps also
thanks 4 ur
lovely inquiry