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SUSTENANCE
SUSTENANCE
what pure and generous hearts
I have met on the way.
what kindness and compassion
have struck my soul
to the near ecstasy of being.
what tears I have shed for already
missing you.
I wrap myself in the warmth of
your thoughts and the music of your
words that soothe and sustain
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Comments
Sparrow
Wed, 2016-12-07 04:48
Dear Joe
We have walked many dreams together here.
The tears are not one sided,
but believe that one day as we journey on,
there we shall meet to talk of many things.
I think you would love the beach
rather than the cave I usually stay in.
The beach of the soul stretches for ever,
where the warm waters of love lap the shore.
I will see you there, great write,
I thank you.
Yours Ian..
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Esker
Wed, 2016-12-07 13:46
Well versed Joe!
I was away
but back!
parking my butt
inside for a spell
a break from
here and there..
tunes today..
writing!!
Thank U!
Mr steven!
Candlewitch
Wed, 2017-01-04 11:34
hello,
not only beautiful, this thought, but wise and inspirational!
*hugs, Cat
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