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Grampa with L O V E
We love you granpa
YOU are that kindly light
that leads the whole world tonight
to another Christmas delight
may be brighter than bright
as it surges from your heart's warmth
'tis a passion for all to know
Granpa
you GLOW
We all love to HUG YOU
all must know
MERRY XMAS ALL
Still no SNOW fall
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Sparrow
Fri, 2015-12-25 19:16
Loved
I remember going to Cold Lake Alberta one year in the 90's
or back some place and on Jan 1st there was a picture in the paper of a girl in a bikini at the edge of the lake the temp had stayed above freezing until the 4th of Jan, then the lake froze, and we carried on with our chopper trial, so not to worry the snow is coming and the temp will take your breath away lol
Good write take care out there,
Yours as always Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Fri, 2015-12-25 20:04
will read
on return
till then
Dream not about me
you alone will shatter
to me un-beknownest
how will it matter
you are just a part
of another clatter
Oh mighty
River
take my soul along
to the sea,
and
O my friend
will you wait for me,
till I reach
the estuary of life
torment not me,
just wait for me.
Sparrow
Mon, 2015-12-28 04:15
Loved
When we reach out for that great Ocean we leave all things behind and once again become as the Ocean.
There along the journey/Sojourn of life we pick up much, all these things will be left on that final shore of golden sand as we regain our place, in that great Ocean of dream time..
Yours, Ian, as always..
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Mon, 2015-12-28 13:15
yeah yu keep deamng and surfing
ere with nature i am merging
you Ian will keep searching
alidzain
Sat, 2015-12-26 14:22
loved
The only snow you can find in my country is the man-made one in the Snow City.
Alid
lovedly
Sat, 2015-12-26 17:25
you surprised me alidz
i thought you were referring to the one at night
Buddha
Sun, 2015-12-27 21:41
I am a Grandpa "Papa" and the
I am a Grandpa "Papa" and the love that you penned in your poem comes warmly to light. A nice Chrismas poem. Buddha...
lovedly
Mon, 2015-12-28 00:08
thank you
granpa
lovedly
Mon, 2022-05-30 13:05
FOR OLD TIME SAKE
MAY SCAN
though late