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keep posting some one may be reading ------damned
Time
ad infinitum
Man you talk of a time
ad infinitum
we will not be therein
then what cream
would you cherish
but simply white and human!
I wonder man
at least enjoy your today
when life came about
all was cold
now to heat we are becoming
touchy and bloody bold
what the hell
those who were iced
now enjoy heat- like
and
those like we two
only love to play
the politically poetic dice
the game of cats and mice
which is your side
for a ride?
AND
who’s going to throw the dice?
and who shall pay the price?
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Seren
Tue, 2015-07-07 01:06
Lovely
I'm reading keep writing my friend
if you take out the ego the words will flow
Ad infinitum
Love Jayne x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Tue, 2015-07-07 10:08
i have Cancer of EGO
how will it ever go ?
yet I flow
thanks let go!
Seren
Tue, 2015-07-07 14:13
Please DON'T use the Cancer
Please DON'T use the Cancer word even worse you used it with regards to your ego ?
Tut tut ... J
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Tue, 2015-07-07 17:15
what ever
can't separate it ever
Seren
Tue, 2015-07-07 18:03
What ever ? Really ? Jayne
What ever ? Really ?
Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
weirdelf
Tue, 2015-07-07 21:24
You pay the price
for writing pseudo-profound crap poetry.
This is not a gem.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
lovedly
Wed, 2015-07-08 00:39
i know
i love gems tasty
weirdelf
Wed, 2015-07-08 11:52
I don't.
Stop writing self-indulgent crap. Stop pleading for attention like an 8 year girl.
Write righting like the good poet you can be and everyone will stop taking you like a pathetic joke.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
lovedly
Wed, 2015-07-08 14:07
Glycerine drops will not work they are fake ok
Glycerine drops will not work
they are fake
these glycerine drops
will not work
they are fake
only on actor's screens they work
Tears just roll
as in love
no don't fake
em my love
weirdelf
Wed, 2015-07-08 16:23
see?
obscure bullshit
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
lovedly
Wed, 2015-07-08 21:59
are u on
medicine
Seren
Thu, 2015-07-09 09:56
Lovedly I will not ever haunt
Lovedly I will not ever haunt your page as your just plain cruel
And I wont become a clown in your circus anymore
But I know the show will go on
Your ego demands it
J
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Thu, 2015-07-09 11:30
O what a peach
O what
ur a peach