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Broken Hearts
You promised to bid that heart
a love-a life,
but all it gained
are woes and lies
instead.
So
if you can't keep up
your promises,
and pay that heart its dues,
why don't you
give one last lie?
Say:
I love you
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Nordic cloud
Sun, 2012-06-24 08:04
One last lie,
One last lie,
and what a lie Rula.
Ann.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Rula
Wed, 2012-10-03 16:05
Anna
Many thanks for coming to read this and sorry for the belated reply.Seems I've neglected my blog a while,haven't I ?
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author commentNordic cloud
Mon, 2012-10-08 21:49
Not too constant myself
dear Rula. Many walks in the woods
take me away, before snow comes.
I sam revising my many poems and
will make myself little books, one of
which will be hand written and painted,
another where the computer reads my
writing and prints it, perhaps with some
photos too. Must also do the promised
book of my relative's poems, or they'll
all die before I've finished!!! ;) Anna
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Rula
Tue, 2012-10-09 11:53
Wow Anna
Great news indeed! Really happy for you.Wish you the best of luck.
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author commentIan.T
Tue, 2012-10-09 04:27
Rula
A lovely cry from such a broken place, I would add an "S" to due on that somewhere around line 9. Though it sounds OK then there is the point that more is owed to that Heart..
Take care and keep writing, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Rula
Tue, 2012-10-09 11:55
Thank you Ian
for reading and leaving that nice comment.
I really too appreciate the suggestion . I shall edit for extra dues (((smiles)))
Really appreciate it .
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author commentIan.T
Tue, 2012-10-09 12:03
I shall send
An emergency mend kit for hearts.
It has plasters of love
and wraps of cuddles
that will soon heal the break.
Then a meeting invitation to a like soul
For you to travel on ,
Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..