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Docmaverick
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Submitted by docmaverick on 5 September 2007 - 7:32am.
Style / Type:
Western Classic
Look at all the lonely people
shuffling through their daily lives,
searching for that someone
with only sadness in their eyes.
Will they ever find who they need
or search from place to place?
Never realizing love
dismay worn across their face.
Will they ever find that someone
who alone will fit their style?
Or will their hearts be full of sadness
leaving them an empty smile?
Many think that there’s no hope
and that they’re sentenced to this fate,
for some reason of their own doing
and that they don’t deserve a mate.
But God in all His wisdom
has placed them for all to see,
so that we’ll recognize our fortune
and so we’ll love more gratefully.
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
IN ALL HIS WISDOM
THIS POEM REACHED OUT AND SPOKE TO ME, IT IS VERY GOOD, I LOVE YOUR WORDING.
KEEP SPEAKING THE TRUTH
TONISEARSAKASOFABULOUS
In all His wisdom...
..means a lot to me, also…and I appreciate the kind review.
Thanks,
Doc.