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BEHIND THE GLINT

* not good enough to stream

I have been here as long as man
rooted in his reptile brain
always present, never sleeping
cold and calculating
immoral? amoral?
no difference

You first saw me on the playground
in the eyes of the bully
who'd knocked you down
then laughed

As acquaintances grow older
I am better hidden
yet still I remain
at the bank
..the IRS
..the bargaining table
..in an ex-lover's look

You will see me where adversity thrives
when humanity is buried
by ego
but I am most often seen
in your mirror

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I got the vibe Scribe on this one spot on my friend.. I like this and is this a taste of your free form and if so continue on with it. I would just leave out the punctuation here:
immoral? amoral?

I will let you decide and carry on, write on my friend

Love Mona

thank you mona. Yep, I give free verse a go every once and a while. One of these days I might even get good at it lol...............stan

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I thought free verse might have better impact in describing the "super ego" we all possess. Glad you came by..........stan

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