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Docmaverick
United States
Submitted by docmaverick on 2 August 2007 - 1:40pm.| Updated 2 August 2007 - 2:45pm.
Style / Type:
Western Classic
Take all the sand on every beach
and put them in an hour glass,
and I’ll love you for eternity
and that would go by too fast.
Take all the stars that shine at night
and add them to the sun,
that’s how bright my love would shine
announcing we are one.
Together, the two of us are one
when apart, I feel like half,
for you give me my happiness,
my joy, my smile, my laugh.
So I make this declaration
to the angels up above,
if you hadn’t taken my hand
I would never have recognized Love.
(1 vote)

sorry mate
a bit hallmarky to my taste.
cheers,
Jess