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Silence conveys
At times
silence
is valued much more
you know why
just place a hand
on her /his shoulders
it conveys
Silence alone speaks
a tear falls
love is spread
between two souls
yours and hers/his
silence at times
is bliss
more than a peck
a kiss
silence is!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
alidzain
Fri, 2016-07-08 00:13
loved
This is one of your best poems I have read. Well done.
Alid
lovedly
Fri, 2016-07-08 01:09
thanks there are a few more if u see
just last two so many liked it and this ???
A beautiful butterfly
has the privilege of entry
to any nectarish orifice
let it be planty
flowery
butter fly
will love to their die
even if it be a candle flame
butterflies love
the burning game
and put all humans
to tearful shame
are you now
at least game
O! what a shame
just hide your name....
alidzain
Fri, 2016-07-08 03:25
hmmm. good stuff
its just that I'm quite busy this Hari Raya season so I didn't log in that often.
Alid
Sparrow
Fri, 2016-07-08 03:49
Loved
Good write how long do we have to wait before you write more like this ??
Even uncle Jess will be pleased with this short piece lol.
Take care and I look forward to your next good piece,
Yours as always Ian..
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Fri, 2016-08-05 17:58
three persons asked me
give me a chance
to play with poetry
a romance
and
then see how poetry flows
like the
Thames
the Nile
Amazon or Congo
may be
Brahmaputra Ganges and Lawrence also
world's famous rivers flow
as I,like a new found bard
poet do also
jane210660
Fri, 2016-07-08 11:59
Honestly, Lovedly, when you
Honestly, Lovedly, when you can write like this, you don't need the 'other' stuff.
I love this poem. Jx
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lovedly
Fri, 2016-08-05 18:00
thank you very much ma'am
you see
a poet in me......