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JANICE HERZOG
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Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 18 May 2008 - 12:28pm.| Updated 21 May 2008 - 4:12pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
You give me this feeling
Of longing and wanting
It’s never unwavering
A constant craving
I’m always saving
Hopefully deserving
An emotion that’s unceasing
My constant craving
Yours alone, undying
Wanting, approving
Always deep caring
An ever constant craving
Like a fire burning
A heartfelt yearning
Always needing, never ending
A constant craving
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Please do not critique mechanics. The inconsistencies in style are intentional, or correcting them is not important to me.
I hope you like my poem. look everybody all of my poems are now in lower case. i didn't know you people didn't like all caps. so sorry janice
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Hello, Janice
I have to say, the new format is much softer and more comfortable than all caps. It is easier to follow your train of thought and get the full meaning of your piece.
Thank you for the opportunity to re-read your work.
Best,
Ronda
constant craving
Dear Ronda: thank-you for reading my poetry. i’m still new on neopoet, and have to get used to their formats, and how the website works. keep reading. sincerely- janice herzog