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your stare penetrates

You stare to kill

Your stare penetrates
deep within
any heart
any soul
you devour all
fully and whole
your stare strikes all
young and old

where in the wilderness
do you command
your hold
let all you behold!

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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For some reason, this piece reminds me of my former teacher. She's the ''don't mess with me'' type that even the parents won't raise their voice at her. She won't shout and scream at them. She had this look which makes you want to behave but she has a good heart. Once, I lost my pocket money and she treated me during recess.
gee, I wonder how she's doing....

Alid

ur too
she must be
a peach

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