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YOUR SOLID BRAIN

Brain does never become antique
everyday newer synapses are developed
the more you keep your mind activated
the more calm you will be

memory only recedes
if one is not calm
is jobless
so keep yourself
occupied

you are only 76
In Canada and USA
they are considered
as old age kids

87 is perhaps minimum age
for men
women have no limit

did you read my two best poems
do kindly

MOM'S SMILES
and
WAIT FOR ME

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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are you talking to Lovedly? You know what they say about talking to yourself? Who is 76? ~ Geez.
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the one I knew
he flew
thanks
I @82 am still due
Gee I thought you knew

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