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YOUR SOLID BRAIN
Brain does never become antique
everyday newer synapses are developed
the more you keep your mind activated
the more calm you will be
memory only recedes
if one is not calm
is jobless
so keep yourself
occupied
you are only 76
In Canada and USA
they are considered
as old age kids
87 is perhaps minimum age
for men
women have no limit
did you read my two best poems
do kindly
MOM'S SMILES
and
WAIT FOR ME
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Fri, 2021-09-17 08:55
Who...
are you talking to Lovedly? You know what they say about talking to yourself? Who is 76? ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Fri, 2021-09-17 12:59
76
the one I knew
he flew
thanks
I @82 am still due
Gee I thought you knew