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Your Smile is Intoxicating

Your smile is exotic
it's intoxicating
it sends swift currents
down my bent spine
straightens many a thing
which at my age become
sans

Still I love to watch our smile
so very fragile
it's wild and n the forests of darkness
where there is no sun
your blushes ignite the dried up leaves
autumn is coming
I can see

will you smile with me
rather more smile
will ye

blush~ blush I can see
waters trickling

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

the metaphor master I think of when I see the name lovedly.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

Trisk

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This one hits the spot! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

ANOTHER POETRY POETESS SAID
It's abs professional my
had dog's ears
LOL

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