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your May day ..we come to play
Life is all love and play
then go away..
any day
sad u r folks chose
MAY DAY
Hope they enjoyed their earthly stay
Mine had a wider choice
first in Jan
next in July
followed by 5th May..
next in Dec
and
yet another in October
others in July... October
just one in August
yet one sadly true
early in September too
when will I go wish I,
not heavens knew
do any one of you?
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Sparrow
Wed, 2015-05-13 18:43
Loved
This cannot be a poem as it is a replicant of a comment there must be a separation of words in that use the comment to write a piece or visa versa.
You have a bad habit of cutting and pasting a comment you have made and hoping it is a poem, not so my friend come on I know you have much to say,
Yours Ian
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Thu, 2015-05-14 02:21
bad habits
die hard
let May go
then I may follow
bit busy as of now
Sparrow
Thu, 2015-05-14 03:10
Loved
Behave yourself, you know that your input to Neopoet is read and listened to.
If you go anywhere I shall send the Children after you to play, they love playing games lol..
Take care Young Bard, Yours as always Ian
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti