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YOUR LIFE YOU LIVE

On a daily basis
finally at the evening twilight
they''ve found the darkness
entwine the lapsed daylight
only with a hope
dawn twilight
will be born aright
for all to look bright
as long as there's
day light today
another lovely good day
another life's dawn gone away

tomorrow will surely come
as another today
so why not on this only
Paradise Earth stay
we all must make hay
as long as sun shines today
tomorrow it may, may not
but could rain all humour drain
while some may still sustain

each one has own choosing of his lively way
so have you no say
may day may day may day
today
some day another day
let's call it tata what twas a grand day

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Free verse
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Comments

Your first line is maybe redundant? or un clear. I like your poem it is very phylisophical I feel like your mayday is a good way to describe many things on earth at this moment.

Thank you...Teddy

yes removed it thanks

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