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You and the night
There's something about the night
it brings darkness that allows you see
silence that helps you hear
There's something about the night
that sets you on a high
you can almost touch the sky
There's something about the night
that shields
no insecurities, no fears, no rules.
Just you and the night.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
I love the night
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Comments
chevyvent
Wed, 2017-08-30 23:31
Sorry If I'm Out Of Order But This Poem Is Beautiful
Short and sweet that's how I like them.
I have been away from Neopoet for a while trying to collect my thoughts.
I came across your poem & I felt the love pop up once again.
O.K. you did great but for now like the famed Cat Stevens said, "I must be on my way".
great job !
Mario Vitale
Eumolpus
Thu, 2017-08-31 12:47
nice poem!
Maybe you could get someone to put it to music as it would make a good lyric too, but works alone as a poem with its nice simplicity. Hits the universal poetic rhetoric.
I also like the poetry of Soyinka.
Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings
sewie smalls
Sat, 2017-09-02 12:52
Thanks
sewie smalls
Sat, 2017-09-02 12:52
Thanks
lovedly
Fri, 2017-10-06 22:08
creative short and sweet lady
you( to) see maybe
sewie smalls
Sat, 2017-10-07 09:14
Thanks
I'm glad you enjoyed it