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Yesteryears

My eyes glaze over with soft glossy tender tears
As my mind
Yearns back to yesteryears
Then ferocity’s fears floods into
View.
Throbbing fears
That everyone will just simply disappear
And fall through
the thin silk line of time.
Well
even when their gone
I have to still linger on.
So I stroll
All alone
in a sad and solemn tone.

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Glazes--- glaze? You don't need the (s)

Very very deep I like thin silk line of time, beautiful. And I can feel a powerful emotion throughout. Your last lines are very powerful.

Thank you...Teddy

Thank you

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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I love this. The lines are very powerful. I love how in this poem you write as you are touching the words. Great job!

Vivi
(Love hanging with my family of poets)

Thank you

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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this poem caught my eye so sad yet so very haunting it is beautiful thank you for sharing this with us

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Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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