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yes you honour me

the worlds a fast moving away
towards eternity ….
moms and pops
play hide and seek equally
in the far folds of the universe
one has yet to traverse

an outstanding poet like you
as I stand out too

but you are exquisite
what am I
you alone can say
a legend will I become like you one day,
someday
only heavens can portray
let me not my wisdom betray
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone

man…
a ticket to space for me

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You and Joe making poems out of poems sigh I think its wonderful to be inspired by other writers
I have been on many occasions

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

as a ticket less traveler hahahaa

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as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone

OUTSTANDING !

...''''as I stand out in the garden
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
OUTSTANDING !
JOE GEREMIA

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You took the words from my mouth,
as I rolled down this page thinking I would remark
on exactly the same portion of this poem:

"as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone"

Exactly, Joe and Jayne, wonderful.
Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

for your lovely comment

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