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yes we all are

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2015-03-06 13:02

We all are masters of ourselves
each one is fatty may be distinct
you and I
may be a bit fatter
that perhaps
but then what of that

I can still walk a mile
a day
from morn to noon
you may kindly so say

but then what,
let it be a Sunday, Monday or any day
all are for me like a holiday
as for jobless guys one must survey
what do they do on other days?
But guys like me look towards
a holiday
be it Sunday
to keep friends really busy
you, I and me
see how we can compose poetry...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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lovedly

Fri, 2015-03-06 21:53

lovedly's picture

ALL Piscean

Please accept our heartfelt greetings
in the month of March,
so that you know, who you are,
cool calm and collected- a fishing star,
environmentally sound just fishing around,
all to the depths of the ocean you measure
now you know you are a Piscean – a treasure.

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lovedly

Fri, 2015-03-06 21:55

lovedly's picture

ALL Piscean

P lease accept our heartfelt greetings
I n the month of March,
S o that you know, who you are,
C ool calm and collected- a fishing star,
E nvironmentally sound just fishing around,
A ll to the depths of the ocean you measure
N ow you know you are a Piscean – a treasure.

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