It's a nice poem i must confence and i like the rhyming in the first stanza keep up.

The witching hour, when the mind can play tricks on all of us. And you have captured it perfectly. Regards Roscoe...

with just a few words we are in a horror movie, knowing that if we open the door a hatchet will follow immediately between our eyes! I think the third stanza breaks down a bit...here's a take

It was (staying modern) like being in the desert
then the window opened
I shouted with my entire might (spell check)
but silence broke through
(there was no delight does not work for me,
here we need a stronger line about the sound disappearing)
my dream was buried
in the middle of the eerie nite

I do not think we really need the last line about midnight. The intent of the poem is to convey that eerie feeling in this short video poem, in which the words do work great and you get the reader there right away.
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for whatever suggestions that resonate. We all help each other and the commenting process is a learning process each time we post one. So I thank you too for the challenging offerings.