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Yearning To Touch

There are times when I see you
Yearning from the shadows
For my thoughts and touch.

I reach for you, try to feel
The warm and soft gestures
Of your rosy skin,

Feeling the ample texture
Embedded deep within
Your subtle being

Captivates me completely;
Drives my senses crazy,
Bites me intensely.

I surrender to your moans.
Pour out my obsession
To all your love bones.

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It's good to see familiar names again, specially great poets like you!
Though this site had its share of "annoying" people, I truly missed this site. Happy to be back once again.

Glad you liked this piece. Thanks :)

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Dennis

"Death smiles on us all. All a man can do is smile back." ~ Maximus Decimus Meridius

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was a woman, and you sent that to me, I'd be anxiously awaiting your return home tonight! Great work all around. I think you leave us hanging a little, by not giving a clearer impression of wether or not, this is a dream. Or maybe, a fantasy? ~ Geezer

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Thanks Geezer!

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Regards,
Dennis

"Death smiles on us all. All a man can do is smile back." ~ Maximus Decimus Meridius

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Welcome back to Neopoet....good to see you again...your poetry was missed...the intensity is palpable while reading through...

raj (sublime_ocean)

It's good to see you guys again :)

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Regards,
Dennis

"Death smiles on us all. All a man can do is smile back." ~ Maximus Decimus Meridius

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