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Yeah that's all

Is that all

After such a long time
spent in the wilderness
I have stopped composing
as only Ian reads me
and I stop dead
at two only...Jess' restrictions

now I spend hours leisurely
at a new site
lovely tis

each moment is bliss
they all send flying kiss
gals and guys doesn't matter
its all coz
I am Loved and Lovedly

There some one
Wantedly
Neopoets be happy
You produced a one like me

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you must stay with ; us.; have patience,

not many read me; its quality not quantity=.

neo is your home,

courage,my friebd.

you must stay with ; us.; have patience,

not many read me; its quality not quantity=.

neo is your home,

courage,my friebd.

you must stay with ; us.; have patience,

not many read me; its quality not quantity=.

neo is your home,

courage,my friebd.

at least the ones who reply me

Joe ur one such an admirable human being

read me and my poetry here only
see below

author comment

Good decision.

I don't often get many comments either loved - as joe says - it's not the amount that counts

Love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

I agree with the others - many of us have limited time to read and comment, and feel guilty about it - you are a prolific writer and it's difficult to keep up - but be assured you are valued and don't want you to go!

Love to you

Mand xxxxx

Now you can see that there are a few that read your works and want you to carry on as you have been doing for the last few years.
Just remember that this is a learning place and sometimes we have fun in free writing outside of the workshops, and the two of us do quite well though we complain lots.
Take care young Bard and know we love you, Spoke to Sadie last night and all is well in the universe they live in, my family that have journeyed on, Mum, Dad, Two Brothers, and two Sisters are happy in their new world.
Also the Children that are with the ones here, to give them healing and just comfort are still doing the tasks.
Yours Ian & The Children..

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

which helps me become divine

author comment

Thank you all above

Neopoets
I really do love
and shall never shirk my duty at all
let all heavens fall

it’s NEOPOETS FIRST and the only first
after all
my call
is love all poets equally
read some fervently
then alone you will see
the friendliness in so many

Now I shall always stay
help me if you all may
I am a servant to thine wishes
as my aim is to avoid all clashes
and
I value Ian, Judy, Stan and Joe
also the others so
and may your blessings upon me
bring happiness and glee
also to all of ye
okay thee

author comment

i've been forcing myself to read more while i'm online. there is often little time to do so, but i feel it's important...so DO NOT give up my dear, you are always wanted here on neo.

mag

I expect you get more comments on another site but you need to ask yourself if those comments do anything as far as making you a better poet? I'm also on other sites but it gets old pretty fast when all comments are just a variation on "great poem". Plus if you bugged out I'd have to find somebody else to lecture lmao.......stan

I have learned a lot here
so i pull them up there
don't worry
I will die
but leave Neopoets
NO NO NO

all love me as
loved /lovedly
and
thanks Stan to
great poets like thee

author comment

made me stay how can I thank you
Neopoets do say

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