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the world beckons who first ,

the world beckons who first ,
none know

who will have the first cup
you, i or Joe
tis all unknown

but the fact that i have an eagles eye
and a monsters fastidious brain
can't be just let go down any drain
in stream all my works shall remain

let our grandchildren read the same
and like Jess ,
hopefully they will not call us insane
as jokers amongst poets
we leave by the bye lane
let us as Neopoets
till then remain

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Free verse
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A thought is eternal a write has to have a thought so just work it out, your words will be for ever,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

that is my endeavour
Ian my friend here
there are many more also dear

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You haven't waffled, it is concise and to the point, and it works well

Love judy

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

I haven't waffled here at all
as I do ere summer
as ere fall
I am loved after all

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Your poems will always remain,
they wont go down the drain!
because they are so clever
they'll be here forever!

Nice poem Loved

Love Mand xxxx

u r so kind
when I am being read
yet not dead
do say who is reading
please I'd love to hear voices
even when I'm deaffy

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