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WONDERS

<p>IN MY CHILDHOOD THERE WAS ALOT OF WONDER AND ADVENTURE WONDER LIKE TORRENTIAL STREAMS OF WATER FROM SWAMPS STREAMS PONDS BY MYSELF IN THE SPRING ALLTHOUGH I HAD MY BOROTHER AND OUR GOOD FRIENDS ADVENTURE EXPLORING WOODS AND FIELDS ONE TIME IN THE CITY I WAS WITH MY MOTHER IN A DEPARTMENT STORE CONFUSING MANIKENS FOR PEOPLE PEOPLE FOR MANIKENS OUT SIDE THE GRADE SCHOOL ONE LATE SPRING DAY A FRIEND CAUGHT A BEE IN HIS HANDS WITHOUT STINGNG THEN LET IT GO</p>

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