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Wonderful Love
Wonderful love, love overwhelming
So awesome to me
Beautiful thoughts, beautiful glory
That is in God
Songs of praise and offered
As worship
Praising Jesus with my songs
By: Leona Chaput
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Comments
weirdelf
Sun, 2017-10-29 16:23
I've read all three of your posts so far and
have to disagree with the statement "I write poetry." on your profile. If you do write poetry you haven't posted any yet.
Not an original thought or poetic quality amongst them.
Kelsey gave you wonderful feedback with
https://www.neopoet.com/comment/148657#comment-148657
take her advice, please, before posting any more doggerel.
I would add, not just psalms, read a lot of real poetry.
cheers,
Jess
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