I had been thinking of writing a poem about fallen leaves and you beat me to it with this beautiful peaceful write.Now I'll have to delay until I can come up with something that at least approaches this one.Oh ! by the way, I liked this a lot..................scribbler

could describe your eloquent writing my friend! I so enjoyed this Raj! You are always so interesting in your descriptions. My favorite part was this:

Caressing the simmering earth below
they clutch to its passionate warmth
till the whisper of a brewing breeze
scatters them to spread their charm..

absolutely beautiful Raj

Peace,
Lori

This is a beautiful piece about nature. There isn't a word that I would change! I very much enjoyed the same set of lines as Lori.

always, cat

I agree with all of the above comments. A simply lovely peace full of beautiful imagery.

Thanks for sharing

Love Mand xxxxxxx

Raj,

sorry to sound like a broken record, but yet again your poetry has taken away from the struggles of life and into a paradise.

I read a lot of poetry on neopoet and other sites too, and I must say the only poetry of a calm nature that works for me, is yours. Have you considered putting all your works in a book...happy to buy one as long as you sign it for me.

Thanks for the beautifully crafted poem of calm, tranquility and peace.

regards,

a much more relaxed HS

I once wrote a poem..... AUTUMN LEAVES

You surpass my imagination
i shall have those poems buried
in the snows of QUEBEC
and shall be happy so
to buy a signed book
of yours
Autumn leaves
once for all.

congrats
many poets have already spoken
what value you give to me
tis totally left my friend
to thee,.

I floated on autumns light winds through the trees, I love autumn and all it's colors. I love the choreography you created here, it's a beautiful dance with the beauty of the earths seasons
thank you so much.
Always Eddie