A subtle piece of thought and a memory caress, not sure about one of your Stanzas though it seems to have the tenses mixed:-
Why didn’t you tell me
long ago
what I already know:

Those thing I now know???? as you already know them then someone must have told you previously??

Just a thought Yours Ian.T

I still have the temp in Florida on my phone and noticed its definitely cold there and you are perhaps not prepared for such, I hope you keep good and warm somehow, more warm fruit drinks:)

and the sun burst boldly through... either without the AND or with an S on the burst

into dark corners:..................do you need dark corners? Stare is so strong standing on its own, a stop.

memories that I can

hardly bear.............................we know that you think of your memories when you stare which makes a ............................................ good end to this part

You don’t love me

anymore.................................this seems odd here, unexplained, more a complaint than a poem.

been broken...................I try hard to understand this circle of pain-broken?

Like a field left fallow
I wait for the promise
of the next tomorrow.......I like this verse specially Joe

LuvAnni

......forget my yesterday
and live for tomorrow....

Forget the buried yesterday
and
not even think
of a wishful tomorrow

But live the day today
as if there will be no tomorrow..
take it or leave it its simple,as simple as,
is your will,
the temperature is reducing still

Love conquerors morbidity.

I feel I need more information.