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wings

delicate i am,
I have been in a cocoon
time to fly away.

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senryu
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perfect Haiku in all aspects
well done

Let your mercy spill on all those
burning hearts in hell( L.Cohen)

Why thank you. I thought I was rusty so I am so pleased

Thank you...Teddy

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You could post a couple at a time you know? ~ Geezer.
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Come to Chat on the Darkside
every other Saturday night 8pm to ?
Bring your dark and delicious work
to show.

oh thank you for the tip and thank you for reading my other peom too.

Thank you...Teddy

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thanks

to the far away moon
many would like to
accompany you

Wouldn't that be nice!

Thank you...Teddy

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I enjoy poetry
being born as a poet only

life just passes by me
yet I create milestones
in each poem

Do read the essence
just point out the nonsense

To his is really cool senryu and needless to say perfectly done with a subtle subtext

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thank you for such words, I do enjoy senryu. It's been ages I haven't written one.

Thank you...Teddy

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Love this! Perfect title, too!
Thank you!
L

Thank you. It's one of my favourite type poems senryu.

Thank you...Teddy

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