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winds of change

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a wind of change within a heartbeat's thrum
will alter quite, if not destroy, a world
with unexpected loss in life's calm rhythm
into a dark abyss one can be hurled

a wind of change can also fairly flow
preparing us for life we know to come
allowing small acceptance-seeds to grow
declining in our turn, each one-by-one

but as those life-defining moments chime
some leaving gently, others all aflame
though winds of change are blowing all the time
all manages to somehow stay the same

for even though we're here, and then we're gone
still faith in life and love continues on
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Everyone can relate to this in one way or another but it is always true
And a kind of wise sound come at the ending couplet..Thanks for sharing.

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for the kind comments and the wish for fair weather :)
same back to you xx
love judy

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though winds of change are blowing all the time

Change is the
ONLY
constant factor God //
man created

This universe has no beginning,
no end
that we mortals can claim knowledge of
Loved

loved

thank you so very much for the lovely comment
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

author comment

don't you ever give up?

never in a million years while you continue to use that signature
xxx

thanks for the great comment
love from duchess

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

author comment

rotflmao
xxxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

author comment

tor such a supportive comment
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

author comment

but as those life-defining moments chime
some leaving gently, others all aflame
though winds of change are blowing all the time
all manages to somehow stay the same

an intriguing write from an agile mind.

always, Cat

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love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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I'm getting there. Thanks for asking :)

love, Cat

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