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Who Will Write Her Lovesong
She waits in vain for a new love to begin
this never to be
for she will not let them in
so who will write her love song?
There are places she can no longer go
there are words that she will never know
for who will write her love song
There are so many avenues for her to persue
some may be old, others may be new
but no one will write her love song
Feelings grow restless
with each passing day
her thoughts are scattered and go astray
still no one writes her love song
will it be you?
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Teddy15
Fri, 2020-08-14 18:46
Dear Chrys
of course it won't be me, however you have turned a corner in your poems of late maybe a trilogy of poetry? a wonderful question, some of us ask this every day. when will my time for un dying love arrive, if once in the life now maybe another will arrive. love your thoughts as i have met yours. and i apllaud that you have woken your mind to possibility or maybe just mine? fabulous my dear Chrys. your title is bloody perfect. in my humble thought...
Thank you...Teddy
c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-08-15 10:33
Teddy
thank you, no ones life is perfect
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author commentGracy
Fri, 2020-08-14 19:28
Dear lynn, poor girl, no love
Dear lynn, poor girl, no love song, ever? Enjoy your poetry very much, especially the romantic ones.
Best, Gracy
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c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-08-15 10:35
Gracy
thank you I'l see what I can do about the love poem situation
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author commentraj
Sat, 2020-08-15 01:58
Hi Chrys
it's a question which keeps propping up again and again which is why I believe there is repetition of the line about writing her love song...
i liked the way it's expressed...
be well...
raj (sublime_ocean)
c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-08-15 10:36
Raj
thank you Raj
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author commentCandlewitch
Sat, 2020-08-15 11:03
dearest Chrys,
your words form melodious lines...I hear a song, plain as day! great work!
*hugs, Cat
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c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-08-15 14:25
cat
Realy now I just wish I still had my guittar however after my surgery(from the fall) I haven't been able to play
will take a closer look and think about setting it to music
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author commentSerendipity
Sun, 2020-08-16 07:58
Dearest one.
He was one of a kind and I sit here with tears streaming down my face. I do so wish he was here. I miss him too. He loved you so much. I am sorry to write so candidly. This just wrenched my heart. I dont know whats ahead for any of us. But I do so want you to be happy. Joyously so rapturously so. Love you. x
Your poem is perfect. I see nothing I'd change. Beautifully sad lovely.
Always J xxx
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c lynn brooks
Sun, 2020-08-16 10:32
Jayne
all I can say is thank you
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