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Who was She
She.
In life come some moments
and
occurrences
unexplained
one was such a one
now explained
She.
my minds
inner image
She
She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy
Divine
she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment
gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
and
in the eyes of god
she merged after that
monumentous moment
devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
and
a truthful heart
a soul banish
heaven alone knows
why so
lovely poet was
she
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
nokros
Mon, 2019-07-15 13:52
deep
uncompromising words. i can relate... sometimes one has to move out of oneself to discover self.
lovedly
Mon, 2019-07-15 14:13
thanx a lot
nokros for the loving read and lead
Simon
Tue, 2019-07-16 04:29
She
Must have been the God sent angle of your life,may God bless her for you,for she is also the lucky one
lovedly
Tue, 2019-07-16 09:21
Thanks Simon
SHE
and all she's
are angels
ROSYME
Fri, 2019-10-04 15:11
Into The Forest
Into The Forest
Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2019-09-15 21:38
The distant echoes
into the Forest
I move in alone
how far I shall go
that’s yet unknown
but deep enough to gain my right
and
still not remain out of human sight
but then the forest is far too deep
how much will the darkness sweep
my mind will be a vast lonely desert
with none to converse
the darkness is now most intense
how will I observe
am I still moving into darker ravines
no my voice tells me
the other half of the forest
is like a path into awakening
as from the middle
of the density
I shall be like lightening
entering into the sun’s rising streaks
so out of the forest now I meekly
seek
light re-emerges and makes me wise
the darkness by now subsides
I am out in the open
for all to perceive
from the darkness
emerges a newer soul
and
now is about time
to reach my final goal
She.
In life come some moments
and
occurrences
unexplained
one was such a one
now explained
She.
my minds
inner image
She
She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy
Divine
she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment
gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
and
in the eyes of god
she merged after that
monumentous moment
devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
and
a truthful heart
a soul banish
heaven alone knows
why so
lovely poet was
she
lovedly
Tue, 2021-10-05 20:35
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