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Who was She

She.
In life come some moments
and
occurrences
unexplained
one was such a one
now explained

She.
my minds
inner image

She

She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy
Divine

she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment

gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
and
in the eyes of god
she merged after that
monumentous moment

devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
and
a truthful heart
a soul banish

heaven alone knows
why so
lovely poet was
she

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Comments

uncompromising words. i can relate... sometimes one has to move out of oneself to discover self.

nokros for the loving read and lead

author comment

Must have been the God sent angle of your life,may God bless her for you,for she is also the lucky one

SHE
and all she's
are angels

author comment

Into The Forest
Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2019-09-15 21:38

The distant echoes
into the Forest
I move in alone
how far I shall go
that’s yet unknown
but deep enough to gain my right
and
still not remain out of human sight

but then the forest is far too deep
how much will the darkness sweep
my mind will be a vast lonely desert
with none to converse
the darkness is now most intense
how will I observe

am I still moving into darker ravines

no my voice tells me
the other half of the forest
is like a path into awakening
as from the middle
of the density
I shall be like lightening
entering into the sun’s rising streaks
so out of the forest now I meekly
seek

light re-emerges and makes me wise
the darkness by now subsides
I am out in the open
for all to perceive
from the darkness
emerges a newer soul
and
now is about time
to reach my final goal

She.
In life come some moments
and
occurrences
unexplained
one was such a one
now explained

She.
my minds
inner image

She

She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy
Divine

she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment

gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
and
in the eyes of god
she merged after that
monumentous moment

devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
and
a truthful heart
a soul banish

heaven alone knows
why so
lovely poet was
she

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