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Who was She

She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy

she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment

gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
and in the eyes of god
she merged after that monumentous moment...

devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
a truthful heart
a soul banish
heaven alone knows
why so!
lovely poet she was

on another site 300
have read i since
here none still!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Is this about the experience when an idea makes a brief appearance in your mind for a poem before quickly disappearing?

raj (sublime_ocean)

on fb
some unknown gal wanted to know more about me
gave a lecture very poetic
and when I revealed portions to her
she vanished
leaving my mind in the lurch

glad u appreciated it


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