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Who Am I (my version only )

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2016-08-10 17:23

So many have composed poems
on
'Who Am I'

You are a Lords
also Gods guy
I alone am a seed of Intelligence

No one knows tomorrow
all time we always borrow
we think in or own steeled way
Divine unshaken!
our whole desire
want others also to say
I alone am right

Perhaps you maybe,
but let me catch
my last flight
see me flying away
from all that is humanly
your Gods will!!!

I will dwell in heaven not lonely,
all you guys will be
around me Spiritually
having lost a life of enjoyment
on Earth
only Researching darker tunnels of time
while here alone there is light

Now re- read me
but Slowly

This is my Research only
not of few minutes
‘tis taken me a life time
70 plus years may be

Play safe with me
let your God
remain with thee

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Vivovon

Fri, 2016-08-12 11:55

To be honest, I am not sure who I am. May be I am just a passerby. The theme is interesting. I am familiar with Earth, but not with heaven or gods. It reads pretty good.

xxxxx

lovedly

Fri, 2016-08-12 16:17

lovedly's picture

vivon you have an opinion of your own
we all must have

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