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WHITE ELECTRIC

Submitted by Geremia on Sat, 2015-11-28 02:21

WHITE ELECTRIC

Sudden waves white
electric
cut through a midnight sky
blue- indigo;
flashes of fire uncover
worlds unseen by eyes
blinded by darkness

there are a million points
of light
that lead us to
other realities beyond
the bounds of what we know,
but we would rather live
in the darkness of ignorance
than endure the light of truth

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Sparrow

Sat, 2015-11-28 04:21

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Yep we only tend to see what we are brainwashed to see and our beliefs are the same, we were given the power of independent thought so I wonder why we never use it ???
Good write there young one, Yours Ian..

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Geremia

Sat, 2015-11-28 17:35

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I chose to suspend belief...until I know--and that won' t happen in this life

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wesley snow

Sat, 2015-11-28 17:14

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is not always a bad thing.

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Geremia

Sat, 2015-11-28 17:42

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“The only true wisdom is in knowing you know nothing.”
― Socrates

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