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Where will lovers meet

In silence
in brightness
but only meet
if at all
in drooping eyes
as hearts smile...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Today is lovers day as is any day
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


Hi! This poem is such a gem, it appears at first glance as a bunch of words but when you read it the meaning is so clear! I would just take a look at the last line and make it plural as you are discussing two lovers. This is a piece is truly short and sweet!

never ever delete a composed poem
angels still exist and come to teach
out of the vast wilderness I beseech
Thanks for your kind emergence

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Nice work on the revision! It is a small change but does make a difference! Also… your comments in poetry form are also just as delightful (makes me think)!

kindness be thy virtue kid

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