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Where the vine has grown

Submitted by Edward nigma on Mon, 2022-11-07 19:36

Grimly grown
Into the
youthful
yearnings
towards
being alone.
Within this
wistful world
woefully willing
to wear itself down.
In order to be
branded as
something of
your own .

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Rula

Tue, 2022-11-08 03:59

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First time to meet so hello.
This has a very sad feeling to it. I am sorry if this has something to do with your own life. I ery uch like the internal rhymes as well as the final ones.
Sort and yet rich with detailed feelings.
Thank you for sharing

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Edward nigma

Tue, 2022-11-08 04:50

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My inspiration was this
https://youtu.be/I09Ub84AUkg

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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