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WHERE ONLY WINDS BLOW..CONTEST

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-06-29 19:47

Else it's a paradise
many love to migrate
to this wonderland
you know

NEW YORK
EMPIRE STATE
AND
NIAGARA

THE GRAPES...
THE VINES
THE ORCHARDS OF VALENTINES
all make charming exotic wine

*The world's citizens want to own...

Here is the wind of ease
that blows the Arctic cool breeze
makes us freeze
'tis all there is to life

compose classic poetry
you have the innate ability
love
lovedly

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
Neopoem Of The Week June 26 to July 2nd 2022
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Rosewood Apothecary

Wed, 2022-06-29 20:20

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I’ve always wanted to go. Thanks for the window it was a nice visit. I like your connection to earth it’s very grounding. Keep it up.

Tim

lovedly

Wed, 2022-06-29 22:22

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for your lovely comments and encouragements
I hope you do find some poetry in my
off the cuff works

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Geezer

Thu, 2022-06-30 09:10

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to Niagra Falls, I can say that you are right, Lovey.
It's a beautiful place and after the chill of the falls, one should
enjoy "fruit of the vine" to warm yourself. Sounds lovely lovedly!
You are like our own Niagra Falls, here at Neo. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

lovedly

Thu, 2022-06-30 11:50

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Niagara like lovey dovey
yes damn cooled windy

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-06-30 12:06

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I do hope you went there with someone who was stimulating and inspiring. your poems keep getting better and better. tell me...don't you just love free verse? I sure do! you just flow so freely and with great ease...

*love, Cat

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lovedly

Thu, 2022-06-30 13:45

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I do hope you went there with someone who was stimulating and inspiring. your poems keep getting better and better. tell me...don't you just love free verse? I sure do! you just flow so freely and with great ease...

I WAS BORN WITH IT ONLY
SEE OUR PAST
Cats you know me since past 11 YEARS PLUS
i have helped to spread
FREE VERSE ON NEO
YOU KNOW

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2022-07-01 04:41

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I do know you... I feel like we have grown-up together. and it is good!

*Love, Cat

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

lovedly

Fri, 2022-07-01 11:16

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Thanks Cats we will take NEO further
together
GEE as our leader

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