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When Tears Flow You Never Know

When Tears Flow
from top to toe
Even Niagara Falls
stop for a moment
to share my tear
add on its fragrance
as memories also refreshes
times gone by

O what a life
full of digression
gets washed away in a moment

then Niagara asks
O friend what happened
never mind let tears flow
they wash away all past and present
to pave a new way for the future
this now comes as a new pleasant

Niagara moves on slowly
sadly for a moment
then conveys to me
'Life is Like a River'

let it flow will thee
there is nothing left to worry

Time is in no hurry
glow let tears flow
slowly gradually
Abide with me

I am like thee
flowing along with Time
since centuries
nothing can
nor has ever tried
to stop me

keep moving
wash your eyes
with a new perfume

You as a soul
are truly lovely...

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''A lovely musing on the ways we can ameliorate suffering
by trying to focus on the beauty and cycles of nature.

Pain is a constant,
but so is beauty.
Nice work on this.

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and you as a soul are truly Lovely.

Those last lines have touched my heart. It is true we go on regardless.

Thank you...Teddy

I always reply each and every one sorry wonder how I overlooked it thanks for liking it .
angry you must be haven't seen u around lately LONDONER that be ye.

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Hi lovedly, wonderful reflection on the cycles of life and Nature. As Heraclitus said, "you can never bathe twice in the same river".
The title and contents are fine, but, as usual, I believe some joining together of verses would make the flow of the river smoother.
Enjoyed, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

along with my actual tears
how I wished
reading it you'd
know

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