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when right fight.... if wrong bow

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2018-04-27 08:28

I have been missing
your footsteps '
any ways

as I have been away
for so many days
perhaps
your footsteps
devushka/lady friends
came my way

deaf as I am
you may say
can't hear your footsteps
as always
hardly you speed across
now a days
my pathways

dobri denh...
good day wishes
come from
Niagara
again

from lovedla
la la lala
lol
can you now hear
my silent steps

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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IRiz

Fri, 2018-04-27 08:55

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I try to walk quietly
Not to disturb Lovedly

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lovedly

Fri, 2018-04-27 14:15

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I knew you'd read it
on your place
jess would've cursed me
thanks
tread softly
be worldly
many thieves are lurking
dangerously

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IRiz

Fri, 2018-04-27 14:41

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You poor soul, having a lot of troubles on Neopoet. Just write on.

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lovedly

Fri, 2018-04-27 14:53

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on another site 1000 read me daily
and
yet on another one
at least 300 plus regularly

my poetry is exquisite
neo wants Victorianics'

Your Sunku now shall lead
I will also compose
but help me with syllables counting
on fingers I do poorly

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IRiz

Fri, 2018-04-27 15:17

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Hahaha, counting is not important.

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lovedly

Fri, 2018-04-27 15:20

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2
3
4

x three times well
I will sunku
soonly

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IRiz

Fri, 2018-04-27 17:35

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Sweet.

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lovedly

Fri, 2018-04-27 23:29

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shall sunku tweet

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