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WHEN PETALS BEGIN TO FALL [inspired by our Anni]
WHEN PETALS FALL
[inspired by our ANNI]
When a flower begins to fail
its colors bright
its beauty pale and still
lingers in the morning sun .
Petals fall one by one
as it languishes in Day’s light
until its Night has come
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Nordic cloud
Mon, 2012-05-07 10:31
Very beautiful Longobardolino
Very beautiful, just right,
and when the night is come
and gone the sun,
you sleep well my knight.
Anni
He means this Anni.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Nordic cloud
Mon, 2012-05-07 13:14
And where are they the others
And where are they the others?
When you breath life into words of beauty,
well done you as I know you suffer now.
Annuccia
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Ian.T
Mon, 2012-05-07 13:56
Joe
Beautifully written and always remember that after the petals of the fruit tree fall the fruit sets and brings new life to all,
Yours Ian.T
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