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WHEN DAWN BREAKS
WHEN DAWN BREAKS
I sit by my front door
open to the coming morning
and the silence of the dawn
soothes my troubled soul.
I wallow in my own mystery
alone in this semi-darkness
until daylight strikes
to reveal the world that
has isolated me from itself
and all joys of living.
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Comments
raj
Fri, 2014-10-10 00:02
Joe
Once again you have created a soul full crystalline poem.
Regards and best wishes,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Fri, 2014-10-10 15:43
you speakthough unknowingly not
but the whole truth
we endeavour to raise your morale
may more such versions of life
immortalize you
wesley snow
Tue, 2014-10-14 16:48
I'm dreafully sorry I have not visited lately.
Between workshops and life it's hard to find the time to just read.
This one is up to your usual standards.
W. H. Snow
A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley
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Geremia
Wed, 2014-10-15 07:32
I always appreciated your
I always appreciated your comments, I understand, I am not much of a comments writer. Difficult to control key board==Parkinson's suddenly "turned on me". But I enjoy NEO so much. The quality of poetry is outstanding....and I read everything.
Mille grazie, Wes
Ian.T
Wed, 2014-10-15 19:05
Joe
A great piece though sadness seems to rise before the sun.
Hold in there young soul, the dawn will be a beautiful one, Yours, Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
alidzain
Mon, 2014-11-03 10:35
Love this, bro
Good job.
Alid