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When butterflies decide they fly high
When butterflies decide
to fly from plant to plant
'tis then they only kisses supplant
and
a new cocoon emerges
also as stamens and pollen bask
in the sun
a sunflower
has just been seeded
O lucky one
we all human are
sons of a gun
fired into an oven
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alidzain
Thu, 2016-02-25 21:05
loved
I thought the title is a bit too long. If it was me, i'll just entitled it "Butterflies" but this is your poem, sir. so it's your choice.
Alid
lovedly
Thu, 2016-02-25 21:14
alidz
as butterflies
it was piled
in neopoets
shelves filed
only for five years
hence see.now u read it
thanks friend
no need to sir
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