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Wheels Turning
Wheels Turning
So many wheels
and turn they must
for if they don't
the'll turn to rust
Turning, churning
thoughts are burning
memories into my minds path
spokeless, wordless
thoughts ever surging
leaving only dust
Spinning,never winning'
all is endless revolutions
evolving then dissolving
all in it's wake
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
This was written for a picture a friend had sent me and wanted a poem they had taken of bicycles
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Not Explicit Content
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Rula
Wed, 2020-06-17 01:42
Hello C lynn
A wise descriptive little piece. Very much enjoyed the read.
Hope your friend likes it too.
Thanks for sharing dear.
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c lynn brooks
Wed, 2020-06-17 07:42
Rula
Thank you
yes he did like it
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author commentc lynn brooks
Wed, 2020-06-17 07:45
Teddy
Thank you
To be honest I wasn't thinking of a bike when I wrote this and you picked up on that right away
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author commentGeezer
Thu, 2020-06-18 11:53
Hmmmm...
Just seeing a whole lot of wheels turning in your mind. Wondering who goes there? A poem within a poem. ~ Geez.
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c lynn brooks
Thu, 2020-06-18 20:45
Gee
Very astute observation thank you
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