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what of a poet

A new wave poetry
Well the same mind coughs so very often...very often
some music flows in some ears
while for else it’s a cause of tears,
when poetry flows from seamless fathoms
none can critique on rhyme or rhythm,
this one emanated
as I scanned in ecstasy,
at some ones video so exotic
that my mind also became
equally erotic
thus I composed this so poetic,
ere I became neurotic

Raising Ecstasy....
Let me be young again...
In the summer of my life...
in bikinis or without...
in seas wide and deep
and you will feel the rods inside out ...
as you will nod
and in ecstasy...
rebound only
if I could turn back the key...
the lock could open easily...
if you were as exotic
too...

What is poetry
an emulsion of ingredients
some I shan’t like to name
many guys and gals will blush and flame

Love is of only significance
life does portray…
of what kind I leave it for you to say

My mind only speaks of one,
Singular loyal sex
A lovely battle you have won…
(with only one)
change your stance,
only if you will
try the Kamasutra to till
and a variety of positions
will make you flash a definition
of what sex is like
with the same person
yeah both for man or woman

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

I have to say this one felt like a combination of disjointed thoughts, there needs to be a edit on this one and only you can do it there is a message somewhere but its lost in the muddle, I have started an edit for you ill have it done tomorrow or the next day will post on the poem when I am done :)

try and tidy this one up it really needs it

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

ok will do as u say

loved

author comment

this is the main poetry
rest is icing
just to say
how a poet discovers a verse...

Raising Ecstasy....
Let me be young again...
In the summer of my life...
in bikinis or without...
in seas wide and deep
and you will feel the rods inside out ...
as you will nod
and in ecstasy...
rebound only
if I could turn back the key...
the lock could open easily...
if you were as exotic
too...

loved

author comment
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